Seivin Verses for GMB
Poem
They are fermin the fower winds: Five grey- stemmed daffodils on the hill abuin Eynhallow that whirlmagig air intil pouer. Aa Simmerdim on Flotta – a thrummlin column o virr: the fleerin ee o Sauron lowps and rages in its touer. Fishermen wi lap tops, tractors steert by Sat Nav, Progress chaps our door unbiddan tae win us ower. Sunlicht asklent a green wave maun be wrocht as an equation: the Physic mind is mappamouned whaur aa is swack and sure. The makar speirs the silence, raiks the taigle o time-wrack for signs and kennings, patterns thrang in his hairst o hours. The solar wind pents miracles yet a muckler ane by faur, we’re a mystery o pairticles ablaw the cosmic glower. For aye we’re raxin scaffolding o sense on circled yirth whiles Magnus sails his saundstane ark abuin our clash and stouer.
Poet
William Hershaw is a poet, musician and songwriter and Principal Teacher of English at Beath High School, Cowdenbeath.
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About this poem
This poem was included in Best Scottish Poems 2015. Best Scottish Poems is an online publication, consisting of 20 poems chosen by a different editor each year, with comments by the editor and poets. It provides a personal overview of a year of Scottish poetry. The editor in 2015 was Ken MacLeod.
Editor's comment:
This tribute to the Orcadian poet George Mackay Brown balances technological and poetic responses, within each verse and in the poem as a whole. The scientist and the poet both see patterns, one mathematically and the other intuitively. The 'saundstane ark' of St Magnus Cathedral references one of George Mackay Brown's most memorable images.
Author's note:
Physicists threip that nae information is tint ben the universe we belang tae. In Orkney ye maun see this for yersel. Aa the episodes o airthly and human time are speldert ower the islands, beaches and rocks afore yer een. George Mackay Brown is a makar I am lippent tae in mair weys than I can puit intil words. I jalouse he micht hae been a troubled saul himself, yet there is a philosophical comfort tae be taen fae his thochts anent oor peerie place attour the ocean o time. These verses are a tribute tae him and his norrae that we are aa o us makars, speirin at the silence. Seivin was a byordinair number for George and kittles in his ain verse in monie guises. Aiblins the story o Saint Magnus and his martyrdom is gey mair thrang, a myth o sel-sacrifice for the guid o the commonweal that kyths in ilka airt o his poetry.
Glossary:
whirlmagig: in this sense, rotates; thrummlin: trembling; virr: strength; lowps: leaps; unbiddan: unasked; asklent: aslant; wrocht: fashioned; mappamouned: charted, mapped out; swack: sure footed; speirs: interrogates; raiks: searches among; taigle: tangle; thrang: busy; hairst: harvest; ablaw: below; glower: glare; raxin: extending; yirth: earth.